Wow! This drawing is just outstanding, I think you did more then fine, better then awesome, and hit the outstanding piece from heaven. c: The lips and eyebrows are spot on.I also think how you shaded her neck,that's just awesome. I think it may look better if she had more streak lines in her hair when it curve's back, but what should I know. The cheek bones and the detail's on the body is fine. I don't think anything needs to be fixed. She look's perfect. Just a little dark, but what should I know. I'm just a beginner. I hope this is a good critique..